I know it shouldn't bother me, but it does.

I know that it was just an incidental scene, and those characters don't matter much, but the Morphling's death could have had a much greater impact if they'd actually shown them painting each other instead of the one throwing up.  It would have made the lady's death actually mean something.  As it stands, having Peeta tell her to look at the sky really doesn't mean anything unless you've read the books, and I think that's a shame, and a mistake that could have been easily rectified especially after they had him paint the floor.

Yeah, we'll be coming back to those.

The first twelve pages.
What was that all about?
Thank goodness whatever it was cleared itself up.
Nothing like starting off with a good soul crushing.
But I had to move on.
I went over it twice.
It's better now, and I'm sure it's not really as bad as I think it is.
Or it won't be after I go over it again.
And again.
And maybe again.
Probably again.

Now commencing Project Story Time.

I feel like I should be sitting on the edge of a carpet circle.

Don't forget Bill.

Over the course of drawing all of those birds into the trees, I became Bob Ross.

I had no idea that birds could live such interesting lives,

Or have such aspirations,

Or be named Phyllis.

Draft Six Complete.

Chaptering complete.

Operation Story Time soon to commence.

You're not really misunderstood, are you?

No.
No he's not.