Then I realized that if I was going to be writing the scene from that particular character's point of view, he wouldn't see a lot of the stuff that had originally been there.
He'd see parts of it, but he wouldn't see it all.
That's why the file ends on 217 instead of lord only knows what page.
It doesn't change the fact that there's still about a 70 or so page difference between the two drafts, but it helps.
Sort of.
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